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Dimples accompany her smile,
like children opening their first birthday present
or wise women reminiscing.
Morning fog, sighing over the hills,
calling a lost friend.
Soft, unrelenting voice,
tart like lemon cheesecake,
softened by cream ravines
and crumbling mountains.
Canary wings in flight,
yellow haze seducing fireflies,
taking us away to
beginning and end.
like children opening their first birthday present
or wise women reminiscing.
Morning fog, sighing over the hills,
calling a lost friend.
Soft, unrelenting voice,
tart like lemon cheesecake,
softened by cream ravines
and crumbling mountains.
Canary wings in flight,
yellow haze seducing fireflies,
taking us away to
beginning and end.
My first attempt at the colour poem challenge. Although the contest ended years ago, you can read up on the form of the poem in this journal right here:
To make things more interesting, my colour poems will capture a typical scene or moment in our lives.
More colour poems:
Indigo Dreams
Pink Alleyway
Red Rose
Forest Green
These gorgeous photos really helped me capture the beauty of the colour yellow:
Color Poem Contest!Color Poem Contest!
There's still one more day to get your entries in! Last call! This contest closes on Sunday!
I've been encouraged to make this a news article, so I'm giving in
This form has taken off since I introduced it to dA, at least among my watchers. I've seen enough creativity come out of it to feel like a contest has the ability to produce some excellent pieces. The form is flexible enough to allow room for lots of interpretation, but rigid enough to still provide a bit of structure. I've never found an easier form to write in - no syllable counting, no rhyme schemes, no nitpicky details to fuss over (unless you want to!). So here it is:
Line 1 - Your color.
Lines 2, 3, 4 - things your color looks like.
Lines 5, 6, 7 - things your color sounds like.
Lines 8, 9, 10 - things your color tastes like.
Lines 11, 12, 13 - things your color feels like.
Line 14 - sum it all up.
I've been fairly flexible with the way I stretch the interpre
To make things more interesting, my colour poems will capture a typical scene or moment in our lives.
More colour poems:
Indigo Dreams
Pink Alleyway
Red Rose 
Forest GreenThese gorgeous photos really helped me capture the beauty of the colour yellow:
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This is gorgeous. Great job with the imagery here. You've captured the color perfectly. <3